Blood splattered on the ground as Dawn bit through leather and chainmail.
As his companions fell one by one that confidence had been replaced by fear. In the beginning, there had been confidence in the Northman’s eyes. Yet with each swing of his greatsword, Ser Arthur drove Ned Stark backward. His shoulders ached from the ferocity of the morning’s swordplay and each step he took reminded Ser Arthur of the landed blow from one of the Northmen’s Morningstar. Dawn sang as it bit into the sword of his final opponent. Ser Arthur had avenged his Lord Commander and the spearman laid headless on the ground along with three of his companions. Ser Gerold was breathing his final breaths, the spear in his side made each breath a wet wheeze. Ser Oswell had taken a sword through the throat, not before he took two men to the grave with him. Where there had been three of them now there was just one. Around Ser Arthur, men lay dead or dying. The air was hot, stale and carried the scent of blood. King Aemon Targaryen, the son of Prince Rhaegar Targaryen and Lyanna Stark is born with traditional Targaryen features and raised in Essos by the last surviving member of his Grandfather's Kingsguard, Ser Arthur Dayne. An age of wonder and terror will soon be upon us, an age for gods and heroes.
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